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11 March 2010 @ 09:56 pm
Chains of Earth Prologue (Harry/Draco)  
This fic needs a bit of introduction.  First, this fic belongs to [info]byaghro , who has been waiting patiently for TWO YEARS for me to finish it.  I KNOW, RIGHT?  And since today is her birthday I've decided to stop procrastinating.  I even commissioned cover art from [info]draykonis , which everyone has already seen.  I'll be posting this in pieces because it's currently 80k and still not quite finished.  Without further babbling, I'll just say HAPPY BIRTHDAY, ESBY!  Loads of thanks to [info]faithwood for the beta, because it's just wrong to make your beta beta her own fic.  :D



 

Chains of Earth

 

Prologue

 

When we walk to the edge of all the light we have

and take the step into the darkness of the unknown,

we must believe that one of two things will happen.

There will be something solid for us to stand on

or we will be taught to fly.

 

            -Patrick Overton

 

            Draco was cold.  Cold and damned uncomfortable.  A shiver coursed through his body, jolting him to awareness of things other than cold and discomfort, although those were still present.  Both sensations intensified when he opened his eyes.

            What the fuck?  He sat bolt upright and then had to shut his eyes until vertigo and the urge to vomit subsided.  He swallowed hard against the taste of bile.  Drugged, then.  Or hit with a Cruciatus while he was down.

            He opened his eyes more carefully to examine his surroundings.  Merlin, it was cold.  And nearly dark.  His gaze tracked over the inky stone that surrounded him on all sides, followed the repeating pattern up and up to the only spot of brightness—a patch of lead-coloured sky far above.

            “I’m at the bottom of a pit?” he asked aloud, as if hoping his voice would dispel the illusion.  His breath fogged the air and he wrapped his arms around himself without bothering to climb to his feet.  Apparently the culprits responsible for bringing him here did not particularly care if he froze to death.  He knew without checking that his wand would be gone.  He checked anyway; it was.

            Draco got to his feet.  As he did so, his robes brushed against something.  The clink of glass on stone drew his attention.  Two vials lay at his feet, along with a scrap of paper.  He bent and picked them up.  The writing was unfamiliar, and very hard to read in the gloom.

            Malfoy—you have been judged and found wanting.  Others may forgive your crimes, but we do not.  It is well known that you never kill directly, preferring to let others do that for you.  Therefore, we will follow your example and even offer mercy, of a sort.  We have left you two potions.  The one with the black cap contains a strong poison.  If you wish to atone for your crimes, you will drink it.  We cannot promise you a painless death, but it will be quick, and your miserable existence will come to a swift end.

            If you are weak and choose to live, you may drink of the vial with the white cap.  In so doing you will live, but at the cost of your humanity and your precious pureblood status.  You will become less than human, a creature reviled and feared, barely more than an animal.  You might even have the means to escape your prison.  Choose wisely.

            Draco stared at the vials in horror.  Both were death sentences, as far as he was concerned.  The first would kill him painfully, but quickly.  Draco nearly threw it to the stone floor.  He had no intention of killing himself.  He looked blankly at the other vial.  Less than human.  Reviled and feared.  What the hell was it?  Vampire blood?

            Draco tucked the vials into a pocket of his robes.  He experienced a moment of panic when they nearly slipped out of his numbing fingers in the process.  He steadied his nerves as they dropped into a pocket.  Even horrible options were better than none at all.

            He clapped his hands under his arms and stomped his booted feet.  A few snowflakes drifted down from the opening.  Shit, that was just what he needed, even more cold.  He marched in place again and felt pain shoot through his toes at the jolt of circulation.  He walked the circuit of his small prison and looked for any possible escape.  There was none.  He realized he was in no mere pit, but a well, which explained the stone.  He supposed he was lucky not to be standing in water.

            The walls were smooth stone with mortared gaps too small for even fingertips to grasp.  The exit was so high overhead that he would have been hard-pressed to escape even with a rope.  Without his wand, he was helpless.  And freezing.

            Draco sat down and huddled against the wall, trying to warm himself as much as possible.  The circle of light above grew steadily darker and the snowflakes increased in number.  He wished heartily for the warm cloak, hat, and gloves he had been wearing when he was taken, but he supposed the items would only prolong his suffering.

            He was unsure how long he held out.  He tried running in place and waving his arms, but the exercise only warmed him for moments and left him colder than ever when the icy air whistled into his lungs.  He shouted with rage for a long time, vowing revenge on his kidnappers and cursing them with every vile fate imaginable.  He half-hoped his shouts would draw attention from above, but no face appeared to view his torment.

            He finally slumped against the wall in defeat.  Lethargy closed in on him like a shroud and he knew it was induced by the cold.  Soon he would want nothing more than to lie down and succumb to it.  He refused to allow that.  No Malfoy would lie down and die willingly.  Even suicide would be a better option.

            Draco dug in his pocket for the vials.  He held them carefully, as he could no longer feel his fingertips.  He looked at the glass containers in sardonic amusement.  He was lucky they had chosen monochromatic caps.  Colours would have been impossible to discern in the thick darkness that surrounded him.  As it was, it took several minutes of blinking at them through ice-encrusted lashes to determine the faint paleness of one cap that distinguished it from the other.

            Inhuman or dead.  It was a harder choice than Draco would have imagined, especially with the cold crushing down on him and promising to draw him into peaceful oblivion.  In the end, it was the promise of revenge that decided him.  Inhuman was still alive, and alive meant vengeance.

            It was nearly a moot choice.  His frozen fingers could not pry the cork cap from the vial.  He tugged at it and half-sobbed in desperation before finally thinking to use his teeth.  Even then, he had to try repeatedly as the vial kept slipping through his hands.  Finally, the stubborn cap loosened and popped off.  Draco’s teeth chattered so badly he wondered how he would drink it.  He forced himself to relax and held the vial in both hands, tipping his head back and dumping the contents into his mouth.

            It took all of his willpower to swallow and keep the potion down.  The taste was beyond vile and the texture was thick, oily, and evoked images of vomit or coagulated blood.

            When the contents hit his stomach, Draco forgot inconsequential things like taste and texture.  He screamed aloud as pain exploded through him, starting in his gut and roaring through every nerve ending.  The agony went on and on until he felt certain his unknown assailants had lied and both vials had been filled with the worst poison imaginable.

            And then the pain changed.  It did not diminish, oh no, but altered in intensity.  Where Draco had previously been cold, he now felt dipped in flame.  He tried to look at his hands, certain they were on fire, or melting, but more than the surrounding darkness blinded him.  The pain seemed to centre in his back, over his shoulder blades.  He felt his flesh literally ripping apart and he screamed again.  It was too much, and Draco gratefully succumbed to blackness.

 

            His first awareness was that he was not cold.  His second was that he was still bloody uncomfortable, in spite of that.  Draco opened his eyes to dim light and blank stone.  He sat up gingerly and noted with relief that he was at least partially human.  He could see his hands and they looked perfectly normal.  He did a quick mental check and thought he felt okay.  There was a heaviness pressing on his shoulders, but everything seemed to be intact.  He stood up carefully and nearly overbalanced; he caught himself against the wall, still cataloguing.  He remained in the fucking well, which was no surprise.  His feet were normal.  Legs were normal.  Draco gripped his crotch.  That was normal, thank Merlin.

            Draco heaved a sigh of relief and noted the huge cloud of fog left by his breath.  The floor was dusted with a thick layer of snow, but Draco was not cold.  He flexed his fingers and found no stiffness, no chill, and no hint of frost damage.

            What the hell am I, then?  Vampire, after all?  Werewolf?  Either would be unpleasant, but not unbearable.

            And then Draco flexed muscles he had not previously owned and caught a glimpse of feathers over his shoulder.  He spun quickly, thinking himself no longer alone, but he lost his balance again.  He fell to the floor and landed on something that gave him a most abnormal twinge of pain.  Draco fell on his own wing.

            He stared at the edge of it protruding from beneath his leg and gripped the feathers in disbelief.  Feathers.  He reached over his shoulder and a sickening sensation caused his stomach to lurch.

            Wings.

            He had wings.

            The sheer unreality of it caught him by surprise and he laughed crazily.  Wings.  I am a winged Malfoy.  The thought destroyed his brief flash of amusement.  He was a Malfoy no more.  He was not even human.  He was a freak.  Draco’s knees nearly buckled at the thought and his wings flexed instinctively to maintain his balance.  The movement dislodged the remains of his robes—they had obviously been shredded when his wings had emerged.  Draco tore off the material and nearly threw it aside before recalling the last vial.  He retrieved it and placed it in a pocket of his trousers, thinking he might yet need it.  As an afterthought, he picked up the empty vial, capped it, and kept it as well.

            He looked at the circle of light above.  It was still lead-coloured and a few random snowflakes drifted down.  Those could no longer hurt him, at least.  He was not cold in the slightest.

            Draco flexed his wings and set about learning how to fly.

 



CHAPTER ONE

 
 
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lrndng[info]lrndng on March 12th, 2010 02:47 pm (UTC)
interesting beginning
Cheryl Dyson[info]dysonrules on March 12th, 2010 04:25 pm (UTC)
Thank you! Wait until Harry shows up. *adores Harry*
jayfromperth[info]jayfromperth on March 12th, 2010 02:53 pm (UTC)
Epic!fic here we come! The Queen is on her throne, ready to deliver awesome!fic to her loyal followers...
*loyal follower waits patiently for next installment*

*smirks at cute queen*

*winks at queen*

*offers body for queens use*
Cheryl Dyson[info]dysonrules on March 12th, 2010 04:25 pm (UTC)
Pffffft, yeah, until the first hot boy wanders by, and then you'll ABANDON ME! *sobs*

(Of course, I'll just follow with a camera, so I'm not seeing a downside here...)

*glomps you*
solas_divided[info]solas_divided on March 12th, 2010 03:57 pm (UTC)
I can't wait for more of this! Please don't make me beg *gives puppy dog eyes and pouts*
Cheryl Dyson[info]dysonrules on March 12th, 2010 04:24 pm (UTC)
But I like begging. *waits for begging*

:D
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Jocelyn Lavin[info]groolover on March 12th, 2010 04:01 pm (UTC)
Ooh. Exciting! Can't wait for more. And I'm particularly intrigued that it's tagged "wingfic" rather than, say, "veela"... until I noticed you don't HAVE a Veela tag even though I know you've written Veela stuff, so maybe I'm getting all intrigued for no reason :-)

Actually, scrub that last bit. It's a new story by you. Of COURSE there's reason to be intrigued!
Cheryl Dyson[info]dysonrules on March 12th, 2010 04:23 pm (UTC)
*grin* I should put a note that this is NOT a Veela fic. *spins* I love this plotline!

*glomps you*
vesperagain[info]vesperagain on March 12th, 2010 04:05 pm (UTC)
Flailty flail flail! THE EPIC FIC!!! And the cover art...gotta worship Draykonis! And Esby, you lucky, lucky gal, you!

Where are you, Cheryl? I want to smother you in hugs and smooches and my undying devotion! And thanks. And...can't think right now...you're so awesome. This prologue is so awesome. *is ded of excitement*
Cheryl Dyson[info]dysonrules on March 12th, 2010 04:22 pm (UTC)
LOL! Thanks, bebe! I can't believe I'm finally posting the epic thing! *flails* I have so much loveage for this fic, it's not even funny. I think I'll post the first chapter soon and then I'll be gone for a few days, so this won't be my usual speedposting fic. (Plus the chapters are hella long, so it might take people a while to read them.)
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being_here[info]being_here on March 12th, 2010 04:42 pm (UTC)
Excellent! Long fic! Am so excited!
Cheryl Dyson[info]dysonrules on March 12th, 2010 10:37 pm (UTC)
*flails* Me, too! :D
daftfear: Draco Narnia[info]daftfear on March 12th, 2010 08:16 pm (UTC)
OMG Draco + wings = GUH.

*melts into goo*

Poor bee though, forced to pick "inhuman"... I want to squish him.

Also like Draco exacting vengeance. Yes. :D

I can't wait for Harry to show up now.
Cheryl Dyson[info]dysonrules on March 12th, 2010 10:37 pm (UTC)
He is not a happy camper. Hopefully Harry can fix that. :D
(no subject) - [info]kiraohara on March 14th, 2010 04:05 am (UTC) (Expand)
the center of the room and beyond: draco scared by transigent[info]snottygrrl on March 12th, 2010 10:35 pm (UTC)
awesome beginning. am in love with the cover art as well ♥
Cheryl Dyson[info]dysonrules on March 12th, 2010 10:37 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I love that pic so much. *happy sigh*
harrysdragoness[info]harrysdragoness on March 12th, 2010 11:06 pm (UTC)
wow! awesome! please please tell me it'll be updated today! *sends internet chocolate* <3
MichaB[info]celemie on March 12th, 2010 11:22 pm (UTC)
I was wondering if we were ever going to see this! :)
I remember the picture and being intrigued and then not finding the story and being annoyed. AND HERE IT IS!!!!!
"a winged Malfoy"
hmm, I think that is even better than a regular one! Wing!Draco is sort of unbelievably cute to me...

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!
SuzyBlack[info]suzyblack on March 12th, 2010 11:27 pm (UTC)
WOW!! This beginning was really interesting XD

I'm looking forward to the next chapters! ***
besamislabios[info]besamislabios on March 13th, 2010 12:47 am (UTC)
Oh very interesting and promising beginning!

The art is absolutely fantastic, I'm in love with the wings!
Ai, aye, eye!: HD[info]geminai5 on March 13th, 2010 12:54 am (UTC)
"Draco gripped his crotch. That was normal, thank Merlin."

Mwahahaa! So Draco! Anyhoot, I'm very happy to see a H/D fic from you. Lovely beginning! And lucky Esby!
Byaghro: Dray - Chains Kiss[info]byaghro on March 13th, 2010 06:00 am (UTC)
You know I love this with a love that goes beyond unhealthy. But I just wanted to state it here for the record.

LOVEAGE AND AROM FOREVER!
serendipity_008[info]serendipity_008 on March 13th, 2010 07:44 am (UTC)
I am soo excited to see another H/D from you. I missed them.
Can't wait to see how Draco goes about getting his revenge :)
Jae[info]enchanted_jae on March 13th, 2010 07:47 am (UTC)
Oooooooooooooooooooooooh!
Maggie: Harry/Draco: TB-OTP[info]teas_me on March 13th, 2010 04:17 pm (UTC)
oooh what an interesting beginning. Looking forward to seeing where you go from here.
Feromone[info]feromone on March 13th, 2010 04:47 pm (UTC)
My , my Dyson. I am so curious as to where this will be going. Also I wonder how they are going to 'get together' so to speak :-)

I AM <3-ing this by the way!
sinlesstomorrow[info]sinlesstomorrow on March 13th, 2010 06:59 pm (UTC)
omgsh wingfic. My excitement cannot be sufficiently portrayed. Draco's reaction was spot on, imo: Draco stared at the vials in horror. Both were death sentences, as far as he was concerned. I love Malfoys, and what would Malfoys be without obsessive attention to blood status?

Was it Faith that wrote Harry with big, beautiful black wings...? Who was that...
yanagi_wa[info]yanagi_wa on March 14th, 2010 01:13 am (UTC)
I like the beginning.
fauxpersonae007: capslock[info]fauxpersonae007 on March 14th, 2010 02:51 am (UTC)
How interesting! I'm already gunning for Draco and Harry to catch the assailants. That must have been so scary for Draco! I would have just cried and froze to death.

Lovely start and I can't wait for more!
cassie_black[info]cassie_black12 on March 14th, 2010 07:56 am (UTC)
Oooh, new fic from you!!! *does happy dance*

I LOVE Draco with wings ♥
shi_knows_who[info]shi_knows_who on March 14th, 2010 01:36 pm (UTC)
oooh-er! a new story!!! i can't tell you how excited i got when i saw this update! so far, i am loving it! (i have read the 1st chapter also, am commenting here coz i am that lazy)

dying to know what draco is! ooooh, maybe he really is an angel! its super cute how harry thinks he is beautiful! i mean, harry ALWAYS thinks draco is beautiful, but its soooo cute how he gets distracted!

sigh...i love you! a drarry fic is just the thing to get me out of my post-true blood depression <3
[info]chagyaron on March 15th, 2010 02:36 pm (UTC)
Draco gripped his crotch. That was normal, thank Merlin.--LOL. Trust Draco to be worried about that.

This is a very interesting start and i can't wait for Harry to appear*is very excited*
Irene[info]queenmuffykins on March 16th, 2010 12:57 am (UTC)
Eeeee!!! I'm so excited to read the rest!!
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